Although more and more people read the news on the Internet, newspaper will remain the most important source of news for the majority of people.
Do you agree or disagree with that statement?
The Internet has brought substantial changes to today society, for example, there is an increasing number of people reading news on the internet. While there remains some disagreement as to whether the internet or newspaper would be a more popular means for people to get news, I personally believe that the internet is of paramount importance in helping people access new information in faraway places and the readership of newspaper is gradually in decline.
First of all, it is an indisputable fact that the internet revolutionalised our way to receive news. In earlier times, people purchased a newspaper in the morning and read all the news of a day. In contrast, now every news is updated constantly on the internet and this facilitates the flow of information. As such, people could get a vast amount of information using the internet. In addition, people are able to choose distinct sources of information from different websites which they believe to be more reliable and trustworthy.
Equally importantly, the internet enables readers to exchange information with other people. They not only place emphasis on reading news but also shift the focus onto further discussions on the forums and social networks. These arguments again promote the search for new information. Consequently, while the internet places the world at our fingertips, it takes a step further by helping people digging deeper into a wealth of underlying knowledge. Admittedly, these further conversations would potentially cost more time, I would contend that the internet encourages people to acquire more knowledge and analytical skills.
By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that the internet would become the primary channel of accessing news for the reason that people could catch up on news more speedily and it permits people to gain a deeper knowledge of the focal matter.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 185, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
.... While there remains some disagreement as to whether the internet or newspaper would be a mo...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Equally,
... to be more reliable and trustworthy. Equally importantly, the internet enables reade...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, so, while, as to, for example, in addition, in contrast, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2417218543 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9369815641 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55298013245 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.7429769958 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.769230769 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2307692308 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366161192168 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125927586802 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671236024318 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236950727314 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516379200199 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.