In many countries women no longer feel the need to get married. Some people believe that this is because women are able to earn their own income and therefore do not require the financial security that marriage can bring.
To what extent do you agree?
It is no doubt true that women in some nations prefer to be single or become single parents. Whilst I agree that women are increasingly achieving financial independence and therefore, they might not necessarily rely on the financial support from their would-be spouses, however, there are also some other possible reasons as to why some women hardly need to tie the knot.
On the one hand, it is not necessarily the case that women bank on men regarding financial support. Indeed, women can act as breadwinners in families. Specifically, it seems that more women are well educated in today society than in the past. They are also seen as more astute and more able to deal with multitasking than men. Consequently, many women have become middle-income earners or even high-income earners. As such, men are not necessarily seen as the ones who bring home the bacon. By contrast, women are financially independent and are therefore able to bring up their children well or have the ability to live independently without facing severe financial issues.
On the other hand, there are other plausible explanations as to why women might not be interested in marriage. For example, on the grounds that militant feminists have made a significant contribution to gender equality, women are now more likely to believe in themselves. They are capable of establishing high self-esteem and more likely to believe in their own value. In addition, women are inclined to have more hobbies than in the past. For instance, they can travel to many different tourist attractions worldwide and join in a variety of sporting activities even extreme sports traditionally played by men such as skydiving or bungee jumping. Furthermore, a multitude of women are shifting their focus towards their careers rather than families. They are inclined to make a lucrative income and enjoy their brilliant careers.
In conclusion, whilst I agree at financial reasons are likely to give rise to single-parent families or single women, I also sincerely believe that there are also other convincing explanations as to why women might choose not to get married.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 474, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... past. For instance, they can travel to many different tourist attractions worldwide and join ...
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Line 4, column 149, Rule ID: ALSO_OTHER[1]
Message: Use simply 'there are other' or 'there are also'
Suggestion: there are other; there are also
...le women, I also sincerely believe that there are also other convincing explanations as to why women...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1779.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12680115274 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90077929344 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515850144092 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 584.1 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.7732792153 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.647058824 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4117647059 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6470588235 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265418437448 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853675473044 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447508416406 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167784057671 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235568006301 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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