A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people think that animals should be treated as humans are and they should have similar rights while others think it is more important to use them as we desire for food and medical research work. Both point of views will be discussed.
With regard to exploitation of animals, people believe it is acceptable for several reasons. They think that human beings are most important beings on earth and every effort should be made to make life comfortable and ensure survival. Experimenting on animals for cure of a disease takes priority over animal suffering. Furthermore, it is believed by some that to meet nutritional needs in our meal, it is acceptable to kill animals.
On the other side, it has been seen that animals do have same sort of feelings as humans have. They also feel pain if they are caged for long time. A substantial amount of progress has been made in medical field and it is not necessary to perform tests for cure of diseases. Argument of killing animals for meeting nutritional needs is not adequate as most of the vitamins and minerals are available in green vegetables and fruits and grains.
To sum up, although some people argue killing of animals for food and research work is ethical, there has been evidences which proves that it is not the case and efforts should be made to protect animal rights.
- It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?What sort of punishment should parents and 67
- A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research.Dis 56
- A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research.Dis 67
- A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research.Dis 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, while, sort of, to sum up, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1109.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78017241379 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47817089902 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564655172414 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2392075743 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.818181818 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0909090909 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.18181818182 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.404065858263 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137968772105 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111210131684 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255678549622 0.151304729494 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067063738217 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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