Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both views and give you opinion.
At the present time, due to the enhancement of education, 'School or family?' is alway a controversial question about the to most proper place to teach children to be a good member of society. This essay will discus both view before giving a personal opinion.
On the one hand, since family is the origin love and cave, children will get the most precious advice and lesson from their parents who will never hurt them. Moreover, as parents who understand throughout their daughters and sons, they can choose the most suitable way to teach their children about the awareness of being a responsible and righteous person.
On the other hand, despite the unconditional love and care tin teaching children of parents, sometimes kids do not get enough education about life skills as their parents are not capable to teach them every single aspects of life. Therefore, school, considering as a 'small version of society' is suitable place for teaching practical lesson about being a good person of society. At school, there is a large system of knowledgeable teachers - who are trained and qualified to have the ability to teach students not only about their subjects but also about moral standard which is necessary to pupils' future of being responsible citizens. In addition, friend network at school also helps children to improve their interpersonal skill which is helpful to their future.
In conclusion, as it is obvious that both school and parents play significant roles in children education, I opine that they should coöperate with each other to give the best educational programs to children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09885931559 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66913786582 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585551330798 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.3195727317 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.1 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258114083737 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113250664963 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712708391896 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17621371067 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0818078066374 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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