Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language in order to work and travelling in foreign country. Others say that the only reasons why some one should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
In today's world, learning a new language is very inevitable for people to get more and more knowledge about the every corner of world. Therefore, a group of people opine that people are learning foreign languages for the travelling as well as to work. whereas, other contradicts this view by saying that there are many others reasons behind the learning new languages. So, this essay shall analyse both the view points along with my opinion in the upcoming paragraph.
According to the first school of thoughts, people are learning new languages for their own purposes. Firstly, these days most of the masses want to migrate in the other country. It seems that today's employees looking not only for multi-skilled employees but they also want people who knows their mother tongue. Secondly, travelling is the most popular reason behind the learning foreign as there are many people who are going to the different nation to pursuing their happiness far away from home.
However, a new languages shouldn't be learned only for working and travelling in the foreign country. The prime one is that, most of the learners are learn the foreign languages because it helps to broaden their horizon. By this, I mean to say that new languages are improves the understanding of the students and they become allrounder and self - confident.
To conclude, I believe that learning a different language should be not only for satisfying our physical needs like money, but also our moral needs because never had such a big thrust for knowledge been displayed.
- The charts below shows the percentage of time eorking adults spent on working adults spent on different activities in a particulur country in 1958 and 2008 56
- The chart below shows the proportion of British students at ine university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English in 2000 and 2010. 78
- Recent studies have show that overweight people tend to eat junk food that the highest in the fat some people argue that increases in the price of such food will serve as to reduce the amount of overweight people To what extent do you agree or disagree 77
- The pie charts and table give information about the total value and sources of fish imported to the US between 1988 and 2000. 67
- At the present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of older people Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages 33
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, whereas, as to, i mean, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1292.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02723735409 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54388795026 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556420233463 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6164857476 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.666666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.91666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402511371888 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149676310874 0.084324248473 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090780906395 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235157542002 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0807959018096 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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