More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why? Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?
People nowadays tend to have children when they get older compared to their counterparts, who decided to have children as soon as they get married. While this tendency can be beneficial in several aspects, I believe that drawbacks overshadow its advantages.
The main benefit among couples, having children in their later age is that they could have good preparation, especially when it comes to their financial condition. This kind of preparation is fundamentally important to ensure the whole development of a child in the future. For example, they could save their money to buy new toys, clothes, and other essential types of products, which are served to meet the basic needs of a child. Consequently, children could experience a decent life and be mentally healthy.
However, alongside the influence of this benefit, I believe that the disadvantages are more noticeable. If people get older, their health conditions will not function well enough, which increases susceptibility to various types of disease. This is a major problem, potentially affecting the health of a child after giving birth because they may not grow physically healthy. For instance, research, which has recently been conducted in the US, reveals that new-born babies, who parent in the age-group of 40 to 50 years old, commonly have lighter weight compared to those who parent from 25 to 35 years old.
In conclusion, while such preparation as financial stability is crucial for most parents when giving birth and taking care of a child, which is easily achieved when they get older. However, I believe that the mentioned disadvantage above could be more detrimental.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, may, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20817843866 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87538718557 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594795539033 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3867772883 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.75 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219895094136 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079662116125 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069361036361 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131941401046 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549475003979 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.