You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to, because you have some problems.
Write a letter to your new employer. In you letter:
Explain your situation
Describe your problems
Tell him/her when you think you can start.
Dear Sir,
I am offered a position of Finance Manager with your company. My joining date is agreed to be 1st August 2019. I would like to thank you for extending this opportunity to work with your esteemed and renowned group. I am writing this letter to explain my current obligations, which requires me to postpone my joining day by 2 weeks. I can begin my duties with your company by 15th August 2019.
Being Assistant finance manager, my current role is full of responsibilities and demand knowledge of historical background of underlying transactions. Further, I have put colossal efforts in the audit assignment and managed to finalize the audit for last 6 years holus-bolus. We are on the verge of finalization of the audit on any given day. Due to some unavoidable circumstances on auditor’s part, eventually, audit got shifted by three week.
Considering my separation from company and with the active involvement of my management, my line manager managed to cut-short the timelines by 1 week on auditor’s part. As a last resort, my company has requested me to extend my services by 2 weeks to have healthy and mutually beneficial separation, which seems reasonable to me. Lastly, considering unavoidable circumstances, I request you to kindly revise my joining date to 15th August 2019.
Hope you will consider it positively and extend your wisdom in this matter.
Yours sincerely
Gurmeet Singh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 335, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... to postpone my joining day by 2 weeks. I can begin my duties with your company b...
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Line 5, column 445, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'week' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'weeks'.
Suggestion: weeks
... eventually, audit got shifted by three week. Considering my separation from com...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, lastly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1202.0 937.175257732 128% => OK
No of words: 233.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15879828326 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14627696511 2.54303337028 124% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609442060086 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 290.88556701 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3062850384 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8571428571 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6428571429 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 4.34317383033 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164805394511 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651258708553 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640687185995 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120261654842 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0771348307764 0.0580467560999 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 41.2886597938 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.