The charts below show the percentage water used for different purposed in six areas of the world.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The charts below show the percentage water used for different purposed in six areas of the world.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given charts illustrate the way in which water is allocated for 3 major categories of usage in 6 regions of the world.

It is obvious that while agricultural use accounts for most of the water in 4 areas, the 2 other places distribute much of this natural resource for industrial purpose.
In Central asia, a staggering 88% of water is spent on agriculture but at the same time, only about one-sevenths of thatt amount is specified for 2 other purposes including industrial and domestic use. Similarly, people make most use of water on this category in Africa, south america and south east asia with 84%, 71% and 81% respectively. However, the most significant feature occurs in south east asia when nearly one-thirds of total water use is attributed to industry and households, which differentiates them from the 3 aforementioned regions whose water usage for these 2 sections doesn't exceed 25%.

On the other hand, agriculture isn't the key factor in north america and europe but this role comes to industry. To be more specific, nearly a half in total water usage belongs to industrial purpose in north america while that figure of europe is 5% greater. Meanwhile, agriculture still shares a large portion in total as this constitutes 39% and 32% in north america and europe, respectively. Nevertheless, domestic use remained the least water-consuming section in 2 regions.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, nevertheless, similarly, so, still, third, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1158.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 229.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05676855895 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96924607687 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 106.607317073 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576419213974 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 283.868780488 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8833087673 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.666666667 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4444444444 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.44444444444 5.23603664747 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153015120725 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069562470546 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428590089823 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10485530838 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323195515253 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 40.7170731707 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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