The claim that animals have rights has been subjected as a matter of debate since the 1970’s. Are zoos helping or hurting our animals? Should zoos be banned?
humans are the most dangerous animal on this planet, as we have ascending scientific opportunities to cultivate various remedies to safeguard our future, but are other animals or species on earth gifted by such talent? Therefore, in the world where survival of the fittest is the only rule that follows, I would like to add that most powerful should take care of the most vulnerable as well.
zoo are good source of income around the world in almost all countries, even zoo are much adored by all ages of people. From years the motive of zoo has change a lot from just caging animal to preserving them with their natural existence pattern. it has been essential onus of government to make sure that all zoo authorities are performing their duties with high regards to avoid any hazards to animal or human in zoo. zoo in 21st century is no more to keep the animal for charity collection or display. As per a journal in Harvard University tons of N.G.O across the globe has helped to upfront the right of animals and preservation of special species.
Many zoo are now being converted into more of an open zoo, where visitors are into a cage to view animals, we have large aquarium where all sea animals get full space to live and swim. The most important concern has shifted toward animal safety and preservation in present days. More young people are trained and given jobs in zoo so that we get good and proper care for the animals with an ascending in job opportunities within the country. this helps to increase the tourist attraction and solve the job scarcity issue, resulting in the GDP growth of the country.
Albeit humans are the most dangerous animal but being knowledgeable we are caring for the most vulnerable and saving it for a new generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 31.9359605911 150% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1207.87684729 122% => OK
No of words: 310.0 242.827586207 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73870967742 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49866769911 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 139.433497537 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570967741935 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.1643310178 50.4703680194 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.416666667 104.977214359 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8333333333 20.9669160288 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 7.25397266985 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.33497536946 244% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291516366468 0.242375264174 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104160656335 0.0925447433944 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047142036796 0.071462118173 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157212721751 0.151781067708 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703617131174 0.0609392437508 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.1260098522 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 11.5310837438 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.94827586207 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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