In many countries, men and women are working full time. It is, therefore, logical for women and men to share household tasks. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
With the growing inflation rate, people are tending to increase their earnings as much as possible and nowadays, even women of the house prefer to work full time to make the ends meet. As owners of the housework full time and feel tired at the end of the day, it makes sense that none of them will be willing to finish the daily chores at home on their own. Therefore, I completely agree with the view about sharing the routines tasks at home between themselves. This essay will discuss, why should household owners divide the daily necessary tasks and how does it impact their lives.
Nowadays, the husband and his spouse both work full time and any one of them may not find time to finish the household tasks on their own. Hence, they should distribute these chores in the best way possible. Distribution of the work may depend on the working shifts and type of the jobs (eg, if the husband gets up early in the morning, he can prepare the breakfast for his wife as well. Likewise, if the wife does a laundry related job, she can also do the laundry for family).
Distributing these tasks and completing them on a daily basis will also help them to manage their own personal time in a better way and it definitely will bring the peach of the mind in their lives. Even though some house-related tasks might be extremely boring to complete but they are also very necessary and should be finished on a timely basis.
In essence, I am in agreement about distributing the family chores between man and woman of the house to finish them on a regular basis and effective way. This will lead their lives to become a peaceful one and will also generate mutual respect and understanding.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... even women of the house prefer to work full time to make the ends meet. As owners of the...
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Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...e ends meet. As owners of the housework full time and feel tired at the end of the day, i...
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Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...s, the husband and his spouse both work full time and any one of them may not find time t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, likewise, may, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57425742574 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36274128365 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524752475248 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.2544229638 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.5 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118451750057 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463710148985 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427649308247 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0662546672685 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540050054499 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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