Some people think that the design of buildings has affect, either positively or negatively, on where people work and live. To what extent you agree or disagree.
The importance of the design of the building, which was always debatable, has now become more controversial. The substance influence of the design of buildings has sparked controversy over the potential impact of this trend on the whole society in recent years. It can be agreed that the design of the building plays a vital role, although it has some drawbacks. This essay will elaborate on how the design of buildings provides a safe environment for people and how poor sound insulation affects people’s mood, and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerable reasons why the design of buildings has a positive effect on people, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact well-deigned buildings provide safe environments for people. As an illustration, research has invariably revealed that burglary rate has dramatically decreased four times after the intelligent lock has been added into new designed of people’s houses compared with traditional buildings. Therefore, the design of buildings has a positive effect on the whole society.
Nevertheless, some people adopt an opposing view and tend to believe that the design of buildings has a negative impact as there are innumerable reasons for that but the most salient one is that it has poor sound insulation. For instance, John’s father got insomnia recently because he moved to a new designed apartment with poor sound insulation, which directly causes the result that his father can’t fall asleep at night. Thus, the design of buildings will bring a negative effect on people.
In conclusion, from what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that the impact of the design of buildings for people is prominent, although the poor sound insulation should be well handled.
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Suggestion:
... positive effect on the whole society. Nevertheless, some people adopt an oppos...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 288.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92231595752 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53125 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 458.1 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.9997898862 50.4703680194 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.454545455 104.977214359 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1818181818 20.9669160288 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90909090909 7.25397266985 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235974661229 0.242375264174 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101383320386 0.0925447433944 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483488553019 0.071462118173 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15311852524 0.151781067708 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367231577731 0.0609392437508 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 12.6369458128 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.1260098522 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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