Undeniably,respect shown to senior citizens is often considered by many as an important indicator of a civilized society yet this is on the decline in many countries. In my opinion, lack of proper teaching at home and a paradigm shift towards a materialistic life are the reason for this trend. There are number of reasons for this lack of respect and it has certain effects also.
Beginning with, in regard to the declining respects for elderly people, the family bonding at home is to be blamed. The family values and bond are no longer important to the young generation these days as this is occurring due to generation gap. Moreover, multitude nowadays are too busy in their hectic schedules and when they come back at home they are exhausted too much that they are not able to interact with their elders.As a result, conflicts happen between them and olders do not get their deserved respect and amenities. On top of that, young generation in this era is more occupied with materialistic possessions than reading history and learning about their traditions and cultures. Consequently, they fail to understand how important it is to show respect to other members of the society, especially senior citizens.
Furthermore, among there are numerous consequences of this trend, the most severe one is the moral degradation of youth and they find it unnecessary to show proper respect to elder people.Apart from this, they will fail to teach their next generation anything about mutual respect and family value, they will suffer even more when they become old.Additionally, what children are learning from their elders, same they will follow.Finally, as a whole, the society would have selfish members who would not be able to maintain a social harmony.
To conclude, in this society the contribution of the senior citizens can not be ignored and that is why the young generation should show their respect and gratitude to them as well as should provide required facilities to old people.. The lack of respect towards the elderly is a great concern and to mitigate this problem, parents should teach their children morality and importance or family bonds.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, apart from, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, in regard to, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1807.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06162464986 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84212011445 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526610644258 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 121.451279216 49.4020404114 246% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 164.272727273 106.682146367 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.4545454545 20.7667163134 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.7272727273 7.06120827912 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238415775773 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104528334028 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069082049126 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157681114493 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0775215128767 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.66 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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