You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
• give details of your study plans
• explain why you want to get a part-time job
• suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Dear Navneet,
I hope you are doing well in your business on foreign land. I am writing this letter to inform you that I got selected at York University in your country for the master’s course in microbiology and my course is a full-time activity for 2 years duration. The course work includes fours semesters with 1 project of 6 months duration. Each semester includes 26 credits, I have to pass at least 100 credits from all 4 semesters to get the certification.
However, the course fee is high as per my budget, earnings will aid my tuition fees during the study in Canada. The salary for part-time work will also help me to save some money for my future expenses. Therefore, I have decided to do a part-time job simultaneously with education.
I came to know that you are also living near York University, so you will be the best person for me to help in a job search. I insist you to please contact your local residence regarding any opportunity if they are aware in nearby. Please let me know as early as possible if you come across with the vacancy.
Hope to see you in Canada soon.
Best wishes,
Vishal
India
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Navneet, I hope you are doing well in your busine...
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Line 8, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ou in Canada soon. Best wishes, Vishal India
^^^
Line 9, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nada soon. Best wishes, Vishal India
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, well, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 932.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56862745098 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67973656942 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632352941176 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.971162811 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.6666666667 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303786223053 0.216113520407 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101848611365 0.0766984524023 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810913650146 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171465411707 0.12726935374 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579508605034 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.