A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination.
Write a letter to your friend and recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited before. Say where you went, where you stayed, what you can do there and what the food was like.
Dear Mohan,
I am glad that you have decided to take a break and plan for a holiday, I would suggest you to take a trip to Goa. Last year I went there with my wife and it was an awesome visit for us, it was planned for a week, but we spent 10 days because we both liked it very much.
The plenty of options to stay including cheap hotels at old goa, but we preferred to stay at nearby beaches at Hotel Sky International, the sea viewing apartment with blue lights in the evening everywhere in the hotel made it look wonderful. More importantly, pleasant weather in the month of December made our visit great. The hotel was 5 minutes walking from the Cambodia beach.
I would asked you to must visit beaches in the evening time and try for old goa museum also. The beaches are clean, calm and refreshing to visit especially during sun set time and the museum has antique collection of different stones used in making buildings from the emperor time of 1800.
Food is a delicious, mainly sea food of goa is quite famous around the region and pamphlet fish is the best one we enjoyed. They also have special drink called tadi, it is sweet and little salty like lemon soda but it is alcoholic.
I am sure you will have great time there, please let me know if you have any more questions.
Best wishes,
Vishal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mohan, I am glad that you have decided to take ...
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Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'ask'
Suggestion: ask
...lking from the Cambodia beach. I would asked you to must visit beaches in the evenin...
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Line 4, column 88, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...evening time and try for old goa museum also. The beaches are clean, calm and refres...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ty like lemon soda but it is alcoholic. I am sure you will have great time there...
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Line 8, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...have any more questions. Best wishes, Vishal
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1082.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 245.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41632653061 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2638679016 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620408163265 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.3898730828 44.8134815571 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3636363636 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2727272727 16.8248392259 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.09090909091 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173117380231 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640857147992 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0869160886498 0.0603063233224 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101641700094 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0839189933666 0.0580467560999 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 8.62886597938 203% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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