Many people think that more having more money will make them happier.
How important is money to happiness?
Large number of people hold the perception that money is the main source of person’ happiness. Money in any form, is the essential part of happy life. This essay will discuss both points and close with my opinion.
To embark upon, having the ability to buy whatever, one could be more psychological strong with this satisfaction that causes refreshing and happier behavior. With lot of money, person can buy luxurious car, expensive house and other artificial materials, that all are play vital role to make one moody and happy. Moreover, it seems that traveling and meeting with different people also have influence towards the joyful life but all this possible with cash. For example, in the article published in the Times clearly stated that average income family are worried and does not have enough money to go for vacation, that causes some mental disorders.
It is clear that all happiness could not be bought with money but it is true that some worries and problems could be rectified with money. The necessity of money is unavoidable in many terms. Wealth is part of the person’s life happiness because some believe to give charity is the way to make them inner happy. Addition to this, health is the major part of the person’s wellbeing, if anyone have medical problems, now almost every disease could be healed with in short time of period. Therefore, value of money have significant impact to one’s happiness.
In conclusion, it is unquestionable that money does not play any role towards the happiness because one can purchase and enjoy their life with money that cause more happiness. I strongly agree that without or few money, person could be live with stress and strain but one will lack of happiness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 402, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
... the person's wellbeing, if anyone have medical problems, now almost every dise...
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Line 4, column 209, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...iness. I strongly agree that without or few money, person could be live with stress...
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Line 4, column 209, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[6]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun money seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'little money'.
Suggestion: little money
...iness. I strongly agree that without or few money, person could be live with stress and s...
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Line 4, column 296, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... strain but one will lack of happiness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, in short, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97260273973 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5569695835 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554794520548 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8647078762 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.714285714 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286222489171 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108497495412 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505957619293 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185409692393 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0163324553907 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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