Some people believe that college students should consider only their own talents and interests when choosing a field of study. Others believe that college students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.
While starting a new phase of life, the students face many dilemmas. One of most common dilemmas is choosing a field of study could be considered a cumbersome task. There are many opinions that prevail in the society. Some consider that the students should consider their talents and interests while choosing their field of study. While other believe that the students must consider the availability of jobs while choosing the field of study. I believe that the student must pursue the field of study that follows the interests and talents of the student. In the following paragraphs we dig deeper into espousing the stand taken.
In my opinion, the student must consider the talents and interests while choosing the field of study as this way the student will be able to achieve much more academic success as compared to the student who is studying the field far from his/her interests. The prior student will find scoring higher scores effortless as the topics he will be studying will be in regard to his/her interests. As it is not a less known fact that stress due to academic dissatisfaction is prominent in student life. Thus persuing field of study of his/her interests can be the reason of less stress among students.
If a student is follows the interests and talents of his/her own whatever career he/she gets ,will be complacent. We see many people around us who are not happy with life as they find that they are trapped into some nine-to-five job that they did not ever want. Thus In order to live a life that we are joyful and satisfied I believe that if one is having a career of his/her choice, is in a better place.
On the other hand, If we choose field of study based on the availability of jobs there are more chances that the student might get a job that is lucrative as compared to other scenario. He/She will be in more financially sound place. Thus if one considers wealth to be integral part, He/she should definitely go with later opinion.
To sum up I would like to assert that though there are many perks of being a opulent personnel but being satisfied in life, being satisfied with your life choices is something we should aim for and should set up higher in our priority lists.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ts while choosing their field of study. While other believe that the students must co...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...will be in regard to his/her interests. As it is not a less known fact that stress...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...isfaction is prominent in student life. Thus persuing field of study of his/her inte...
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... his/her own whatever career he/she gets ,will be complacent. We see many people a...
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Suggestion: Thus,
...o-five job that they did not ever want. Thus In order to live a life that we are joy...
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to field'
Suggestion: to field
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Suggestion: Thus,
...ill be in more financially sound place. Thus if one considers wealth to be integral ...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, thus, while, in my opinion, in regard to, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 33.0505617978 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1833.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 391.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68797953964 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45567984178 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.442455242967 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 566.1 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.672876123 60.3974514979 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.833333333 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7222222222 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61111111111 5.21951772744 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393440413739 0.243740707755 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141576898162 0.0831039109588 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151978199124 0.0758088955206 200% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21138880897 0.150359130593 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.148720013451 0.0667264976115 223% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 48.8420337079 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.38706741573 86% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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