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People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems. Should government encourage people to move to regional towns?

These days, it is believed that the dwellers who live in the big
cities ought to contend with a huge variety of daily troubles. In this essay, I
will explain several pressing problems which urban citizens cope with on the
daily basis and give my opinion about should they move to small towns.<o:p></o:p> First of all, it can be seen that one of the leading obstacles
comes from workload in their office. For example, it is not abnormal that
people often sacrifice even the weekends for work without any entertainment.
For that reason, in the long run, people are always in status of extremely high
pressure and exhaustion. Secondly, setting down in the centered cities such as
Hanoi or Ho Chi Minh City in Vietnam, traffic congestion is something
irresistible. Owing to a flock of commuters on the street all the time, it is
likely that citizens are driven into frustration.<o:p></o:p> Therefore, I concur that the government need to take concern of
population allocation, which means a number of people should be moved to
neighboring towns. This probably leads to the mitigation of pressure on not
only cities but also the settlers. However, the certain and thorough plan in a
long run need to be taken into consideration because allocation in population
is more likely to exert strong impacts on the growth of the developing cities
and people's life.
In conclusion, the developing cities with a multiplicity of
great opportunities people can seize always appeal to the labor. However, to
shield urban dwellers from a myriad of the resultant problems, it is necessary
to encourage citizens and execute the plan of population reallocation.<o:p></o:p>

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2442.0 1615.20841683 151% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 7.65517241379 5.12529762239 149% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 10.0284116 2.80592935109 357% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561128526646 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 626.4 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.60771543086 124% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 187.35455264 49.4020404114 379% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 271.333333333 106.682146367 254% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 35.4444444444 20.7667163134 171% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.2222222222 7.06120827912 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 26.0 4.38176352705 593% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0744882433428 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481178102248 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0205629958342 0.0667982634062 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0396652374533 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547109916344 0.056905535591 96% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.4 13.0946893788 247% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 2.11 50.2224549098 4% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.7 11.3001002004 192% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 27.74 12.4159519038 223% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.5 9.78957915832 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 10.7795591182 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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