Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others saay that there are more important environmental problems.
Some people consider that the extinction of many kinds of plants and animals is the main environmental problem at this time. Whereas the other argue that we have to face with a lot of more serious natural issues than the loss of species.
Animals and plants or ecosystem in general are vital not just in terms of creating a living space for people but as a means of providing essential needs such as food, water, materials, … everything is from nature. So the loss of some species definitely one of the environmental problems that we need to care about. Hundreds of rhinos are killed every year just for their horns, thousands of trees are chopped down for buildings, more and more names of animals are written in the Red Book. Ecosystem is now suffered a huge damage from human acts. To prevent more losses, many species are protected in national parks or zoos that can be bred up to provide a reservoir population against the population crash. Many campaigns are established to appeal people to not consume products made from horns or furs of wild animals or to donate for reforestation.
Apart from the concern about plants and animal expressed above are numerous of environmental issues such as climate changes and global warming that affect directly to humanity. As the temperature is higher and higher, there is more vaporization from rivers, oceans which leads to shortage of water or long-term drought. For instance, glaciers are melting which stored less potable water for a part of population, in addition, they also use glaciers for food production and irrigation. That shows how global warming can make impacts on people.
From my perspective, I believe that the loss of species is as important as other environmental problems. Global warming not only harms humanity but also animals and plants, polar bears lose their home because of melted ice, for example. So if we improve other issues as soon as possible, we can save many species of plants and animals from extinction.
In conclusion, we should take responsibility for what we have done to this beautiful earth and not any specific ones should we care the most or less than the others.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 126, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ain environmental problem at this time. Whereas the other argue that we have to face wi...
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Line 2, column 515, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'huge damage'.
Suggestion: huge damage
...the Red Book. Ecosystem is now suffered a huge damage from human acts. To prevent more losses...
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Line 2, column 851, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...animals or to donate for reforestation. Apart from the concern about plants and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, whereas, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in general, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1795.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89100817439 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64790699871 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555858310627 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5225842163 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.1875 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9375 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222292889839 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837083862633 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106250166905 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135340483235 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103640494325 0.056905535591 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.