Professional workers like doctors, nurses and teachers make a greater contribution to society and so should be paid more than sports and entertainment personalities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is an undeniable truth that there is still controversy between the entertainment industry and the health and education sector. According to some people the doctors, nurses, and teachers are spending most of their time for a community so that all of them should offer higher wages compared to actors and athletes. In my opinion, I agree that doctors and teachers are the backbones of the nation and they ought to give more money.
To begin with, why the Government must pay high money for doctors and teachers. The first point for this, Doctors and Teachers have spent a great deal of money on their studies and then often attend expensive professional training seminars. Furthermore, one part of the economy of the country relies on the students fees given to institutions for learning that particular course. If the government not providing high salaries to a person who works as a doctor also teachers, therefore nobody eager to pursuing these professional careers in the future, hence this can lead to the economic growth of the country. For example, many Countries are constructing plethora institutions of health and education for students from which the government can earn money also this will help to the growth of the economy.
Secondly, the health and teacher should be top priorities of any government. To illustrate, doctors are serving most of their time for public treatment and providing a healthy life for everyone. For instance, doctors are available 24 hours for the patient also after helping people, the number of people suffering from Hazardous disease decreased, as a result, they all are given one more life. Moreover, teachers shape the future for millions of children all over the world. A teacher is the first person who provides the knowledge to the students for achieving their ambition. In other words, today most people are working in an eminent corporation because of the teachers hard work.
In conclusion, in my view; doctors and teachers are fostering the country for economic development and the students are completing their want with a teacher, for this reason, are they both given a higher salary compared to an entertainment actor and sports athlete.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 502, Rule ID: EAGER_TO[1]
Message: With 'eager to', use the base form of the verb: 'pursue'.
Suggestion: pursue
...lso teachers, therefore nobody eager to pursuing these professional careers in the futur...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, in my view, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1841.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09972299169 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70651436974 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534626038781 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2541850295 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.733333333 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.6 7.06120827912 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0957316690832 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0393788766834 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369522722524 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0747385098864 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392042282222 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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