The table below gives the information about underground railway station in six cities.Summaries the main information by reporting the main feature and make comparison where possible
The following table provides the data about underground railway station when it opened, how many Kilometer it traveled and passengers per million per years.
As an overall trends, Although most ancient railway station of London which inaugurated in 1863 and covered 394 kilometer of route, but highest number of passengers 1927 million traveled by Tokyo railway. While least number and routes covered by Kyoto opened in 1981.
Though London has oldest subway network with 394 kilometer of route, yet service 775 million which is lower than Paris and Tokyo. However, Tokyo and Paris launched railway system almost 50 years later and lower number of routes than London. But provide service to 1927 and 1191 million people.
And most recent inaugurated railway is Los Angles in 2001 covered 45 routes and 50 million people. however, least number of routes covered by Kyoto 11 and 45 million passengers per year. Washington railway with 126 routes and 155 million passengers per year.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 93, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun Kilometer seems to be countable; consider using: 'many kilometers'.
Suggestion: many kilometers
...und railway station when it opened, how many Kilometer it traveled and passengers per million ...
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Line 2, column 113, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'kilometer' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'kilometers'.
Suggestion: kilometers
...ich inaugurated in 1863 and covered 394 kilometer of route, but highest number of passeng...
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Line 2, column 205, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'While the least'.
Suggestion: While the least
...1927 million traveled by Tokyo railway. While least number and routes covered by Kyoto open...
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Line 2, column 211, Rule ID: LEAST_COMPARATIVE[1]
Message: Non-standard use of the comparative or superlative. Did you mean 'least numb'?
Suggestion: least numb
...illion traveled by Tokyo railway. While least number and routes covered by Kyoto opened in 1...
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Line 3, column 15, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'has the oldest'.
Suggestion: has the oldest
...by Kyoto opened in 1981. Though London has oldest subway network with 394 kilometer of ro...
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Line 3, column 50, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'kilometer' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'kilometers'.
Suggestion: kilometers
...ndon has oldest subway network with 394 kilometer of route, yet service 775 million which...
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Line 4, column 99, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...overed 45 routes and 50 million people. however, least number of routes covered by Kyot...
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Line 4, column 106, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the least'.
Suggestion: , the least
...45 routes and 50 million people. however, least number of routes covered by Kyoto 11 an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 827.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20125786164 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31263600109 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540880503145 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.0989274399 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8888888889 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.11111111111 5.23603664747 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.068407883429 0.215688989381 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0314212446222 0.103423049105 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397239439864 0.0843802449381 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0554740442782 0.15604864568 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434214341172 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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