Some people think that spending a lot of money on holding wedding parties ,birthday parties and other celebration is just a waste of money.others ,however,thinks that these are necessary for individuals and society.discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, it become trend that people like to celebrate whenever they feel contentment or at any special occasion. Though some folks reckon that spending a lot of money on holding wedding parties, birthday parties and on any other celebration is just a waste of money, and others urge that these are necessary for an individuals and society. by discussing both the views i will give my opinion in the end of the essay.
At the outset, establishment of clubs and hotels are burgeoning because people are spending a numerous amount of money by celebrating birthday party, wedding party, and so on. But it is consider as a waste of money because that money can be used for the needy people of the country. The folks who are having disposable income are likely to spend more money on celebrating. Also, it is not just a waste of money but it is also a waste of time because time do not wait for anyone. For the celebration they set-up lighting and some decoration items which are once used are thrown away and might be not used once again.
On the other hand, it is necessary to celebrate consequently that a person can remember it throughout his life and also an individual can get some time to spend quality time with their family owning to which they can rejuvenate themselves from their hectic schedule. Moreover, for the celebration they have to spend some money on products to decorate through which government can get income inform of tax. Therefore, for the betterment of the country it become necessary to celebrate.
To recapitulate, i believe that these are necessary for individuals as well as for society because of various benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, as for, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79649122807 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68380916619 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505263157895 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5174505991 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.916666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.414745292845 0.244688304435 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148176140305 0.084324248473 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120318261221 0.0667982634062 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251487065234 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.144208672695 0.056905535591 253% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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