: You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate.
Dear sir,
I am writing about the problem faced during my recent stay at your hotel Taj , Delhi.
I came to Delhi for two days on official work. I stayed at your hotel for 2 nights and the climate is quite cool. Because, of the hectic day wanted to relax once after reaching hotel. To my surprise, the heater is malfunctioning. Informed the issue to the house-keeping team but they were helpless as it was already midnight and no mechanic was available at that time. I left for the work next day with the assure by your team that it resolve by evening. Unfortunately, it was not fixed. after spending the two nights my health condition became worst and catches cold.
As a solution to this problem I suggest to check the equipment regularly and spare an extra room if any sort of issues happen.
yours sincerely,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir, I am writing about the problem faced dur...
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...aced during my recent stay at your hotel Taj , Delhi. I came to Delhi for t...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...during my recent stay at your hotel Taj , Delhi. I came to Delhi for two da...
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Line 7, column 48, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...to Delhi for two days on official work. I stayed at your hotel for 2 nights and t...
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...time. I left for the work next day with the assure by your team that it resolve by evenin...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ft for the work next day with the assure by your team that it resolve by evening....
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Suggestion: After
...ening. Unfortunately, it was not fixed. after spending the two nights my health condi...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
...oom if any sort of issues happen. yours sincerely,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 685.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 147.0 206.0 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65986394558 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48200454523 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55061079209 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.700680272109 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 207.0 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.431981228 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.5 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208111024309 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726240729625 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801253438693 0.0603063233224 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112098967369 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0868159199474 0.0580467560999 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.