Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Submitted by shureoni on Sat, 08/03/2019 - 05:56

There is no doubt that living abroad has become commonplace in the light of globalization. However, a school of thought holds that people living in a different country often suffer from social and practical troubles. This is attributed to a host of factors, and in this essay, I totally agree with this viewpoint.
In terms of social problems, individuals moving to another country are likely to face the language barrier. Difficulties in using proper language in conversation and writing may create confusion and misunderstanding from native people. Gradually, they would be reluctant to form social connections or make friends, or may even become a target for bullying. Therefore, not being fluent at a foreign language is indeed challenging for outlanders to integrate into a new society.
In terms of practical problems, non-native speakers could run into some problems. Their misuse of a foreign language in tandem with differences in indigenous customs would make the locals occasionally unable to understand what they want to convey. As a result, non-native residents tend to miss out on a number of opportunities in life, especially in their career. For example, for those who want a promotion, a lack of knowledge about a foreign language can become a big obstacle to scale the heights of their profession.
In conclusion, it is ... that people who are not fluent in a foreign language when living overseas are likely to face social and practical troubles. However, this issue can be addressed if they make an effort to learn it.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16334661355 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99583989715 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577689243028 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2228590511 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5714285714 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240884986943 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756279555856 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556307251014 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143359655459 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206849062504 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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