Some people feel that entertainers ( e.g. film stars, musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? What other jobs should be paid highly?
It is argued that by some that the entertainers earn too much money. It is agreed as they reach at that status through stringent training and experience. Apart from entertainers, jobs which are associated with the necessities of life should be paid more.
To begin with, it is justifiable that entertainers are paid much as it takes several years to achieve that fame. Sportsperson achieves that position through rigorous training, dedication and facing several injurious during their initial phase. Likewise, musicians and film stars start learning the perfection - required to make money - by experience. They devote their valuable time to learn these skills by competing others to get the coveted spot and to fulfil their dreams which are not certain. For instance, as per the recent report of the Entertainment Recruitment Center Karachi, half of the life of the musician tends to be spent in getting perfection in the field and the remaining half in earning.
People who perform their duties in the amenities required to run the state should be paid more. Jobs, such as Doctor, Teachers, Firemen, should be highly paid as they are the backbone of any country and without them, the country might get crippled. These are the people who come forward to perform numerous duties during natural disasters and address a plethora of people without any hesitation. For example, in Iraq after the war, there was not a single doctor left in the country. Consequently, the country had to face a major problem as there was no one to look after the suffered people.
To recapitulate, although entertainers are paid much more than the other people, years of hardworking is embroiled in getting this spot. Other than entertainers, people who provide essential services, such as Doctor, teachers, should be paid much.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, likewise, look, so, apart from, for example, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.125 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72832825283 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560810810811 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8667979 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.133333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3117878475 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10014750117 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784849117135 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193423792999 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558721060986 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.