An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What solutions can you suggest?
More and more professionals are going to developed countries by leaving their home country to get more wages. The major problem this causes is shortage of experienced professional in the future for their nations and the viable solution is that their government should encourage them to work for their nation by providing them a good facilities and more payment.
The main problem this causes is lacking of the experienced workers into their nation and if there is not proper professional to treat general public like sufficient doctors in the hospital to treat them then it creates a huge problem for that country's government in the future. Because a few doctors can not treat most of the patients into their hospital. For Instance, Harvard University reports states that In 2012, in China, their biggest university in the field of medication had decided to stop their operations due to lack in the doctors who can teach students about the medication.
The viable solution is that government should intervene into this problem of movement of more professionals from their country to others country. Law enforcement agency should set a law to increase the salaries of working people so they can live their life happily into their own nation. Government should provide more facilities to them like free medicals, free public transport, less tax on the amount they are earning so they can stay into their country by saving more of their own salary. For example, Dubai had set a law into 1990s that there will be no tax onto the salaries of employees, professional and business people, it resulted a 40 percent decrease into the movement of their home country people to others nation to earn more.
In conclusion, an enormous amount in movement of their countries residents creates less shortage of professional for their home country is the main problem by this causes and this can be solved if government enforce law to provide good life for their people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 42, Rule ID: GOING_TO_VBD[1]
Message: 'Going to' requires the base form: 'develop'
Suggestion: develop
...ore and more professionals are going to developed countries by leaving their home country...
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Line 3, column 135, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...ere is not proper professional to treat general public like sufficient doctors in the hospital...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 279, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...that countrys government in the future. Because a few doctors can not treat most of the...
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Line 7, column 160, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...eir home country is the main problem by this causes and this can be solved if govern...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00305810398 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62697717554 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.446483180428 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.8662097027 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.6 106.682146367 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.7 20.7667163134 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231917243618 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116791621022 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418074843818 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168082116797 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0198237629071 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.