Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Some people think that music has the magic power makes all ages of people from all over the world in unity. To a large extent, I agree with this idea.
First of all, music can break the barrier of language. No matter which country a song comes from, they can be shared by a variety of people who have a different background. All human have natural ability to comprehend the emotion of music by the melody, even the meaning of lyrics they do not understand. For instance, there are more and more songs were sent to other countries, and finally they became popular in those are.
Secondly, music can prompt cultural fusion. Nowadays, there are a lot of songs that were translated into the local language, which can make us better understand the different cultures. Today we are living in the age of globalization, absorbing the spirit of foreign songs can help us study the difference of cultures. As a result, various genre songs can boost cultures.
Thirdly, some old but classic music continues to be known by youngsters. The feelings and events of the last generation were recorded in the songs, and nowadays can be experienced again by contemporary people. For example, the hardships and glory of establishing our country have been written into the national anthem. When the national anthem played, all of us will be proud of our country and recall the efforts of the founders.
In summarize, in my opinion, all of those different types of music can extremely connect the people of different cultures and ages together.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for example, for instance, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1273.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85877862595 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57429944962 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576335877863 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7593189097 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8666666667 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4666666667 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212157373502 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755307800549 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0868909123387 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150709732028 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115452400205 0.056905535591 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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