Environment pollution is too alarming to be managed by individuals. Real change can be made at
the government level. What extent do you agree or disagree?
Pollution is currently an alarming issue and it's not only constrained to a single nation, but it has covered the whole world. Consequence, of the bigger threats to not only human life but it includes others living being as well. Some people argue that currently, the pollution has reached such an extent that it's hard to curb by the individual, Other says that it's not only the government duty to overcome this major task but every single people has to contribute it. This essay will discuss what are the consolidate steps which we have to take to overcome this problem.
A holistic approach should be taken by all the institution to curb pollution. Its means that all the government, NGO, Others private and public organizations have to come forward and build up a clear plan and strategy comprehensively to overcome this problem. For example, In Sweden government and other organization come forward and they are trying to remove all their thermal electrical generation station with solar power. As a result, the pollution level for Sweden goes down drastically in the recent year.
Not only government body but every individual from the society has to come forward. If people think that government will take all the steps to overcome this global problem then it's not at all possible because Government is there to make a rule and regulation but eventually its general public who has to follow this rule strictly. For example, the municipal corporation of Bombay has made a rule that we should segregate biodegradable in a separate bin. People follow it and as a result, BMC easily able to process biodegradable and electric is producing from it.
To sum up, we can say that the pollution problem can be easily solved with the consolidated effort of the government, private and local bodies. Additionally, Every individual has to push a bit and they should know their duty toward the society and nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
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Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
... rule and regulation but eventually its general public who has to follow this rule strictly. F...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, well, as to, for example, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 8.36945812808 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 20.9802955665 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 5.75862068966 313% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1207.87684729 132% => OK
No of words: 322.0 242.827586207 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94720496894 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 3.92707691288 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75860494424 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512422360248 0.580463131201 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 508.5 379.143842365 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2883000922 50.4703680194 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.785714286 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 7.25397266985 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120794129821 0.242375264174 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044523960874 0.0925447433944 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361562095958 0.071462118173 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0774409175095 0.151781067708 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0230280043029 0.0609392437508 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.94827586207 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.