You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the City Museum shop during the holidays. You decide to apply for the job.
Write a letter to the director of the Museum. In your letter,
introduce yourself
explain what experience and special skills you have
explain why you are interested in the job
I am writing this letter with regards to an advertisement that recently has been published at AFS newspaper about opening a vacancy at the City Museum shop for temporary period. My name is Bilal Djhg, I have been living in this town for more than 13 years. I am currently studying History at ADF University.
I worked as a sales specialist for various shops inside and even outside the city for more than 7 years. Therefore, my selling and communication skills are perfect and will exceed your expectations. Moreover, I've recently obtained First Aid certification from The local Health Council. Furthermore, I speak 3 different languages Arabic, English, and Spanish.
I carefully read that job post and decided to apply because I really would like to acquire new experience in dealing with foreign visitors. Such an opportunity will also help me to strengthen my historical knowledge about the local heritage and culture. And honestly, it's extra financial support that will help me to cope with very high educational tuitions.
I look forward to receiving your great response.
Best regards
Bilal
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, honestly, if, look, moreover, really, so, then, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 934.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18888888889 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8663867219 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.711111111111 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3184373319 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8333333333 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 4.34317383033 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226675124686 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574335956165 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692062496439 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104414545332 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559281567639 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.23 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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