Writing a letter to building manager regarding a problem parking your bicycle.
When you started to use bicycle to go to work
What the problem is
Suggesting the solution of the problem.
Dear sir,
I hope my letter finds you well.
I am writing to let you know that i am unhappy with the current parking facilities and want some modification in the present arrangements.
Let me explain my situation in more detail. i recently have purchased a bicycle to commute to office to support our environment protection drive. my experience was amazing for the first two months but i am struggling with parking since last few days and the number of bicycle has increased and the availability of parking space is not sufficient. it has been observed that the quarrels among the people has become a common trend due to unavailability of parking space.
Could you please approve the expansion plan of parking space so that we can avoid the unnecessary chaos.
it will not only help the people from society but will be considered a successful outcome of our environment friendly initiative.
hoping for an immediate action from your side.
Yours sincerely,
Kushal Rana
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 35, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ell. I am writing to let you know that i am unhappy with the current parking fac...
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Line 5, column 45, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
...me explain my situation in more detail. i recently have purchased a bicycle to co...
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Line 5, column 147, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...pport our environment protection drive. my experience was amazing for the first tw...
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Line 5, column 202, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...as amazing for the first two months but i am struggling with parking since last f...
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Line 5, column 348, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ity of parking space is not sufficient. it has been observed that the quarrels amo...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...at we can avoid the unnecessary chaos. it will not only help the people from soci...
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Line 8, column 109, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... a successful outcome of our environment friendly initiative. hoping for an im...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hoping
...ur environment friendly initiative. hoping for an immediate action from your side....
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 822.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01219512195 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84245769268 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.676829268293 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0139404391 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115916460639 0.216113520407 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04226062576 0.0766984524023 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0263746740097 0.0603063233224 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0541205911027 0.12726935374 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293204368824 0.0580467560999 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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