You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to:
• explain the reason why you decline the offer
• express your gratitude
• explain why you like your current job very much
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to convey my gratitude for considering me for the position of Senior Manager at your company. However, I have decided to continue working with my present employer and hence cannot accept your offer.
The main reason for denying this role is the remuneration package suggested in the offer letter. The salary is way below than my current role and the benefits are not that great either, therefore, after carefully evaluation, I regret to say that I will have to deny your offer.
My current role allows me to have perfect work-life balance and provides a great salary package. Moreover, I believe within a year I would be eligible for the desired Senior Manager role.
I greatly appreciate efforts of your team and staff involved throughout the interview process. I sincerely thank to your HR team as well as the members of interview panel for their time to discuss this opportunity with me.
My sincere apologies for any inconvenience caused due to this. Thank you for time and consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Nilesh Shah
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 908.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01657458564 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69650617827 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646408839779 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.61511963 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5454545455 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4545454545 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 4.34317383033 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15655093176 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637618136849 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428846473958 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.080221303147 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410213643976 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 7.59969072165 125% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.