Recently, the phenomenon of food travel and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that local farming cannot be highly beneficial to the environment and economy, such an issue is regarded as thoroughly constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that sending food thousands of miles to consumers can be negative, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
To begin with, there are various reasons to dismiss food transfer. At first, sending food to other lands brings many financial profits for exporters. However, importing food could have disadvantages for importer countries. For example, they should pay more many for import foods such as fruits and food materials than farming them.
In addition, local food production is more reliable for people's health. But, there are many problems with local farming in drought countries and the regions with cold weather. From a scientific research undertaken by a reputable university, there are many environmental problems with local farming such as water resource limits for drought countries and greenhouse emission from heating in cold regions.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on this topic, I profoundly believe that the negatives of food travel far outweighed its drawbacks. Not only for the environment, but it could also be harmful to the economy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1205.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 222.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42792792793 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8924566539 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626126126126 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9094483266 50.4703680194 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.416666667 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.25397266985 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241652778462 0.242375264174 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898209787392 0.0925447433944 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322518037804 0.071462118173 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13964287964 0.151781067708 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0203955766289 0.0609392437508 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.32886699507 118% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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