All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adults.
What are the reasons for this rise in obesity? How could it be tackled?
Modern lifestyle offers many benefits for both children and adults. However, it also leads to an growth in the number of obese people in society. In this essay, I will discuss reasons for this problem and suggest possible solutions.
Let us start with factors why numerous people suffer from obesity. The first reason is that people usually eat fast food. Plenty of children have gained excessive weight, because in large quantities they consume unhealthy food, which transcends the normal amount of calories. Secondly, people mainly lead a sedentary lifestyle. Many parents, for instance, become extremely fat, since they work in offices, where they largely sit in one place, as well as refuse to do exercise in leisure time. Therefore, after analyzing, it is clear that there is a multitude of factors contributing to the disorder with abnormal weight.
Nevertheless, some dietitians claim obese people should take the following actions, if they want to stay in shape. Firstly, they should do more exercise. Nutritionists frequently recommend people with any stage of obesity, for example, to go to the gym, because they will naturally be able to burn unnecessary fat in the body. Secondly, they also advice people to eat homemade food. Obese humans should quit their detrimental habit of eating junk food and begin to cook at home, involving much of fresh fruit and vegetables, so that they will consume a recommended quantity of calories. As a result, after considering, it is obvious that the likelihood of deal with obesity is large.
In conclusion, even though there are many factors leading to obesity in childhood as well as adulthood, I think that it is viable to address this complication, if people with this illness adopt the above mentioned measures.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 95, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15972222222 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68611793346 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628472222222 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 11.0 2.10420841683 523% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3425627301 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.875 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4375 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179446345715 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588394766339 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683285905873 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133018842524 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0853081323746 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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