Many schools these days have problems with poor student behavior. Why do you think these problems occur? What could be done to tackle these problems?
Excellent discipline at school plays an important role in achieving good academic performance. However, some school principals state that students tend to behave inappropriately. In this essay, I will discuss chief reasons for this negative tendency and propose some possible solutions.
Let us start with factors why numerous pupils conduct badly. The first cause is that parents frequently do not provide sufficient nurturing. Plenty of schoolchildren show no respect to teachers, because their parents have not taught them to be obedient at school. Another cause is that teachers have no right to penalize disobedient students. In the past, tutors used to apply corporal punishment against bullies at schools, but now they cannot resort to that form of penalty, so many students feel free to conduct disrespectfully. Therefore, after analyzing, it is clear that children's misbehavior at schools stems from these reasons.
Nevertheless, some school principals argue that the following actions can help to improve this situation. Firstly, parents should provide better upbringing. The way forward might be for parents to raise their children on the idea of politeness towards teachers, so that they would stop displaying a dismissive attitude at school. Secondly, governments should allow teaching stuff to utilize physical punishment. This problem could also be addressed, if authorities entitled teachers the opportunity to put naughty children in place by penalizing them corporally. As a result, after considering these actions, it is obvious that this problem can be tackled effectively.
In conclusion, even though there are many factors contributing to this unpleasant situation in teaching, I think that it is probable to solve it by taking the above mentioned measures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, i think, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62592592593 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02073538226 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.681481481481 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.20598978 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9375 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.875 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203647560289 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055502207252 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601843018526 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0963760177386 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557340148392 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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