In the 21st century, Industrialization plays a cardinal role in our life and development. There are several significant benefits of having companies and factories around us. It makes our lives easy and efficient. I personally believe that there are certain cons and pros of factories. I feel this way for several reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
Firstly, there are many advantages to having factories around us such as it helps in booming our economy and development. Therefore it increases employment and the locality becomes pause. Industrialization is one of the major factors which carries essential role in the development and through this development, it increases other resources like transportation, restaurants, etc. Take an example, Indian company Reliance has opened its many branches around India' remote areas. It provides employment to poor people and makes them skilled which will help them in their upcoming life. Even many shops and cafes have opened in the remote area because of the Reliance.
Although there are several advantages of the factory near the community, there are more disadvantages such as the main cause for global warming, depletion in ozone, and disturbances in the ecosystem are industries and factories. It gives rise to several types of pollution like water pollution, air pollution, and noise pollution because it increases the CO2 in our environment. Subsequently, It has a tremendous impact on living being and their health and causes the problem like asthma, noisy environment and harmful radiation from factories. It also ruins the peace of the residential area and makes the area more crowded.
I disagree with the announcement that the owner is wishing to open a large factory near our community. It has an adverse effect on the residents. It will destruct their peaceful atmosphere and causes several problems such as the area becomes more crowded, reduces security, has harmful health issues, and especially on children. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. About 10 years ago, a telecom company set its tower in our society. The tower discharges harmful electromagnetic radiation which can cause a serious problem of hearing, memory loss, and heart attacks. Also, it continuously produces vibration tone for 24 hours which is quite annoying for the rest of the society members.
In conclusion, I strongly disagree with having factory close to my community. This is because a community consists of all age group of people. It requires peaceful locality and govt should allocate land to industrial sector separately.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, i feel, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.0752688172 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2204.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 413.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33656174334 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97916479058 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544794188862 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 706.5 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.123225696 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.16 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.52 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84 5.45110844103 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126055322563 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.035647189906 0.076458572812 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631962093452 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0730575403179 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0205186742609 0.0645574589148 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 86.8835125448 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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