You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter:
give details of what went wrong
explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time
say what action you would like the manager to take
You do NOT need to write your own address.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to bring to your notice one of the adverse conditions I had faced during my stay in your hotel. Last weekend the weather condition was not so good in that area. It was raining continuously, owing to which the whole area was flooded with water and the temperature had drastically gone down to around 15 Degrees. While making the booking, the description listed facilities such as air conditoner, water heater, room heater and many other facilities.
The maintain the temperature when I looked around for the room heater, to my surprise it was not working.Moreover, I tried contacting the receptionist but there was no one to assist atn that time for the whole night. This aggravated my situation further. As a consequence of which I had to keep rubbing my palms to produce necessary heat within me, but It was very difficult for me to cop up with the hazardous situation. There was only one blanket which I used to cover my body for the rest of the night. I was truly grateful to God for not falling sick the next morning and immediately decided to checkout after the rain stopped.
I would like to request you to please take a strict action against the missing facilities that were promised but not provided. I would also like to request you to take necessary steps against all those who were missing from the reception. It would be good if you assign higher responsibilities on the shoulders of the reception manager who is responsible for supplying all the help during such a bad weather. I hope to see better facilities for the guests at all time in your hospitality next time.
Yours truly,
Poonam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...oom heater and many other facilities. The maintain the temperature when I looked around fo...
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Line 4, column 106, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...ater, to my surprise it was not working.Moreover, I tried contacting the receptionist bu...
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Line 6, column 128, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...es that were promised but not provided. I would also like to request you to take ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 26.3917525773 155% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 937.175257732 145% => OK
No of words: 289.0 206.0 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71626297578 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76119797723 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 127.690721649 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57785467128 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.9 290.88556701 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.5973421242 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3571428571 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223561458966 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676138322251 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451693965316 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131636203937 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334669158504 0.0580467560999 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.