A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her.
Write a letter to this friend, in your letter
Tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves
Say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her
Explain how to apply for the job
Dear Ahmed,
Hope you find this letter in best of your health. I’m writing this letter to inform you about a job opportunity in a local firm which will best fit your expectations. The job is related to software engineering where you will be involved in the requirements gathering, development and testing of the software.
I think this job will best suits you because you have a major in software engineering and you have been working experience as a software developer. More importantly the company is developing the software for the client from your country and the requirements scoping will be smoother for the company.
If you are really interested to apply for the software engineering position then you may find the job specification, roles and responsibilities in details on company website (link given below). The website have online application form where you can apply for the job.
Looking forward to see you here.
Your Sincerely,
Yasir Ali Panhwer
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Ahmed, Hope you find this letter in best of you...
^^^
Line 4, column 205, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...y website link given below. The website have online application form where you can a...
^^^^
Line 5, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to seeing'.
Suggestion: to seeing
...an apply for the job. Looking forward to see you here. Your Sincerely, Yasir Ali...
^^^^^^
Line 6, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rward to see you here. Your Sincerely, Yasir Ali Panhwer
^^^
Line 7, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e. Your Sincerely, Yasir Ali Panhwer
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, really, so, then, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 814.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11949685535 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94054584341 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 127.690721649 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578616352201 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 254.7 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5786026942 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4444444444 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.440722044013 0.216113520407 204% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.193804157667 0.0766984524023 253% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610610288232 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262711025348 0.12726935374 206% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0812276622147 0.0580467560999 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 8.71597938144 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.