In some cities, there are few controls on the design and construction of homes and other buildings, and owners can decide on the styles of their houses.
Do the advantages of this outweigh its drawbacks?
It is a fact that more and more cities have little regulation of building and construction. While this development can satisfy the demands of many individuals and companies, I tend to feel the negatives of this outweigh its positives in many ways.
One of the great advantages of less control is the fact that designers can freely express their creativity in term of creating unique architectures. As a result, they are allowed to take more risks and experiments with various shapes and materials, which makes the cities look incredibly attractive to tourists. Also, it can speed up the building process because the governments rarely interfere in construction.
Apart from the aforementioned benefits are the massive drawbacks to both the city and its citizens. First, less regulation cannot compromise safety. If the authorities do not tend to supervise the building process, there can be houses with poor constructions which are not approved safe enough for people to stay in. Moreover, those houses can be collapsed when earthquakes occur or can run down in short period of time, which is a life-threatening problem. Second, many buildings with bizarre exteriors can make the locals feel uncomfortable and furthermore, they can ruin the overall layout of the area. Last but not least, the government cannot maintain a standardization of houses in the future because each property now has a different style and to make it happen takes a lot of work and money.
In conclusion, I think that, although there are clearly advantages of few controls for accommodations and architectures, it is necessary for authorities to pass a law to manage the standard of each construction.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 406, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...thquakes occur or can run down in short period of time, which is a life-threatening problem. S...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, moreover, second, so, while, apart from, i think, in conclusion, in short, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20220588235 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15110849598 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599264705882 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2689852555 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.916666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5833333333 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182624969051 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574583124572 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492870450118 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100195146926 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0141054030132 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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