Technological innovations have affected our lives. Do you agree or disagree?
All over the world today, it can be observed that technological innovation has grown in importance over the past few decades. The real influence of advancement in technology over the society has sparked an ongoing controversy over the potential impact of this trend on humans. This essay focuses on the positive effect on everyday life and thus lead to logical conclusion.
At present, their numerous reason why technology is beneficial for us, but the most conspicuous from the excel in medical technology since the creation of first computerized operation in 1990 is quite significant. Moreover, For Instance, the latest medical tech equipment can help a doctor to do robotic surgeries, artificial organs, wireless brain sensors etc. Hence, the precision of computer assists the doctor for tracking patients and prescribe proper medication which in turn will increase life expectancy.
Secondly, there are few other areas where it has solved some major problem such as education, communication etc. In last few decades, communicating channel has increased and information can be send to anyone at any time. Furthermore, education has become easier for all because of internet. Mobile phone development has brought daily life routine on tips and most of the activity can be performed on mobile.
Nevertheless, every coin has two sides, with its advancement there are negative impacts on the society. One of the main drawback of new invention are that they consume a lot of time of a person, such as a mobile phone which has access to all the facilities overtake personal social and interpersonal skills.
From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that technological creations are important for human kind and there is abundant room for further progress in determining the better solution.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, thus, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 5.75862068966 295% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1207.87684729 127% => OK
No of words: 288.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3125 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92142469049 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 139.433497537 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642361111111 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 379.143842365 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9429234514 50.4703680194 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.692307692 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.25397266985 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0650225529315 0.242375264174 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0201966017784 0.0925447433944 22% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.028329197891 0.071462118173 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0321499173172 0.151781067708 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028523928321 0.0609392437508 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.32886699507 121% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 55.0591133005 176% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.94827586207 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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