These days, it seems that an increasing number of people are leaving rural areas to live in the city. Discuss some of the effects of rural depopulation and suggest some ways on which this trend could be reversed.
Write at least 250 words
A high rate of individuals are moving to the urban areas from the village in our modern world of today. Quite an amount of people want to live sand enjoy in the municipal. The reason why people migrate out of the country areas and possible solutions to avert these problems will be discussed.
There are several reasons why a huge number of individuals leave for a large town . One of such reasons is lack of job opportunities. Due to the under development of these villages, people only engage in farming activities. As a result of these, people tend to seeker greener pasture by relocating to the city in search of a job so as to earn a living.
Another possible cause of emigrating to a well developed area is poor quality of education. The under developed areas lack good schools and teachers who can provide standard education to the people unlike a megapolis where there are several schools with qualified teachers.
To curb the menace of people coming to live in a metroplosi, the government should build industries and companies in the exurbans to create employment for the people iiving in the community. Also, the government should employ qualified and passionate teachers that can impact knowledge into young children living in smaller areas.
In conclusion, the amount of individuals moving out of smaller areas to larger areas can be prevented by building schools, companies and industries that can help in the development of the rural areas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, as to, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1221.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96341463415 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74736257429 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548780487805 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2193463177 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.75 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41666666667 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148229480902 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522327685848 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0305077860705 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0795127797559 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281063273048 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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