Everybody's life has it's own ups and downs and have to face both Happiness and Sorrows at different paths of life. Human beings have always been greedy and have never been satisfied with whatever theyhave and always expects for more and Better.
For example, After Graduation A person looks for a basic Job giving enough salary to Survive in day to day life but Eventually, as the time goes he/She starts to expects from more from the same Job as the competition increases, responsibility and Commitment increases, lifestyle enhances and hence requirement of money.
Thus, is my opinion if a person is satisfied with whatever little he has, he will find only happiness everywhere and should be accepting and adjusting with all the difficulties and unhappiness. A happy person always finds a way of opportunity for improvement during hard times of life and ultimately leads to its own self development
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.Discuss both these views and give your opinion. 11
- In many countries, good schools and medical facilities are available only in cities. SOme people think new teachers and doctors should work in rural areas for a few years. But other people think everyone should have the freedom to choose where they work. 56
- Medical technology helps to live long life. Is that curse or blessing for society and mankind? 55
- Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cellphone tracking and security cameras). In many cases the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening.Do you think the advant 56
- Some people believe that children's leisure activities must be educational,otherwise they are a complete waste of time.Do you agree or disagree?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience. 82
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 163, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'expect'.
Suggestion: expect
...ally, as the time goes he/She starts to expects from more from the same Job as the comp...
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Line 3, column 269, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...responsibility and Commitment increases, lifestyle enhances and hence requirement...
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Line 5, column 74, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s satisfied with whatever little he has, he will find only happiness everywhere a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, so, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 758.0 1615.20841683 47% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 150.0 315.596192385 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05333333333 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 4.20363070211 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83075176509 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 176.041082164 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646666666667 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 506.74238477 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.5804207451 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.6 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.065095245541 0.244688304435 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0319767528482 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.014081467856 0.0667982634062 21% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0423626146804 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0117670207928 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 78.4519038076 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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