Some people think that having people from different nationalities and cultural backgrounds living together in the same country makes the country develop faster. Do you Agree?
It is believed by some individuals that multicultural environment helps the country to grow speedily. With a minor reservation, I also support the statement.
To my mind, having a mix of culture can cause little problems because every society has its own norms and taboos. This factor can be dealt with by mutual cooperation and by little compromises to get an Ideal society. Almost all foreign nationals are selected through tough competition around the globe by different companies and institutes. Those people are the cream of their countries. Brilliant brains with diverse mindset working for shared goals certainly lead toward success. Also, different ideas and healthy discussions result in innovations.
Moreover, all expats have been gone through a lot of rigorous situations and living away from home, make their mentality strong and adjusting nature. They become used to of severe environment and they can deal pressure easily. Also because of far away from home, they become dedicated to their job because of having no other family and social schedules. So, they work very hard to mark their name in their field and in this way, they can survive there. They also remained cautious about rules and regulations. As a result, an exemplary society came into existence.
To sum up, I think other than minute issues, which they are already prepared to face and compromise, aliens can provide effective results for the rapid development of the country. So, to recruit foreigners worldwide is nothing less than a positive contribution to the country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 228, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ment and they can deal pressure easily. Also because of far away from home, they bec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, i think, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22709163347 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71408622331 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673306772908 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7237119257 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6875 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123816303706 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0348328575177 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398480050878 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0666700328683 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228189607403 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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