Children are now less active in their free time than in the past. Therefore, sports lessons must be compulsory in schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Children are not much as activity as the past, therefore some people suggest that sports is an obligatory subject. However, others take an opposite view.
In this essay, I will consider three reason that sports should be free option.
First of all, when organizing a sport lesson, schools need to spend a lot of money on sports facilities. They need to equip so much equipments. For instance, they have to provide uniform, many schools have up to thousands of students and each sport needs different clothes. Afterwards, building stadium and swimming pool is very necessary. Furthermore, they must hire more trainers. Paying for medical care is also important.
The second reason is quite common, some young people do not enjoy sports. Instead of playing sports, they choose read comics or watch cartoon movies. Besides, many students enjoy art. They would rather join a performance or paint a picture than play sports.
On other hand, some people reckon that sports lessons are a waste of valuable study time. Most children have to learn so many subject, such as math, literature, chemistry,.. They have less free time. Consequently, they want to choose others activities, not at school. They can go camping or go to coffee shop with their friends, even spending all time to sleep at home.
All things considered, although playing sports is good for them health, but I believe that most people do not agree that children have to learn sports mandatorily at school. In my opinion, sports lesson should not be compulsory.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 127, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...ports facilities. They need to equip so much equipments. For instance, they have to ...
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Line 4, column 113, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to read'
Suggestion: to read
... Instead of playing sports, they choose read comics or watch cartoon movies. Besides...
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Line 5, column 170, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...ect, such as math, literature, chemistry,.. They have less free time. Consequently...
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Line 5, column 171, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...ct, such as math, literature, chemistry,.. They have less free time. Consequently,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, therefore, for instance, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1273.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03162055336 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53199618927 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640316205534 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7905015332 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.65 106.682146367 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.65 20.7667163134 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198739921568 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564270207992 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575207774032 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103292678541 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045577269215 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 50.2224549098 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 11.3001002004 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 11.01 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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