you are looking for a full-time job. write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter:
Introduce Yourself
Explain what sort of jobs do you would like.
say what experience and skills you have
Dear Sir/Madam,
Greeting and I hope this letter finds you in the best of spirits. I am Peter Evans from Wembley, London. I have done MBA from London business school in 2016 and I worked in Sainsbury for 2 years.
After high school, my keen interest was in business studies, so I enrolled in business management in graduation and masters. So, I am seeking a similar kind of job opportunity. The role, I prefer is more of client interactions and presentations on products or services majorly deals with sales. Planning strategies for increasing sales revenue, product development, adding and retaining the clients.
I worked as a business development executive. I am good at lead generations and customizing proposals for clients according to their requirements and organizing for client engagements. Please write me back for any suitable jobs relocation is not a problem for me. Satisfaction and job security is concern than salary. Looking forward to hearing back from you.
Your’s sincerely,
Peter Evans.
- In some countries governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move to regional areas outside the big cities Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages 79
- you are looking for a full-time job. write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter:Introduce YourselfExplain what sort of jobs do you would like.say what experience and skills you have 78
- In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move to regional areas outside the big cities.Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages? 84
- Some people think that governments should give financial support to creative artists such as painters and musicians. Others believe it is a waste of money.Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 56
- Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unaccaptable in today's society. To what extent do you agree with this view? 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 223, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'jobs'' or 'job's'?
Suggestion: jobs'; job's
.... Please write me back for any suitable jobs relocation is not a problem for me. Sat...
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Line 6, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... Your's sincerely, Peter Evans.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 863.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29447852761 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09608750491 2.54303337028 122% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.717791411043 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2241134411 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.3846153846 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5384615385 16.8248392259 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.30769230769 4.34317383033 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167611309876 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530693919964 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051114959497 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0908194446172 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050504872174 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.51 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 7.59969072165 128% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.