Over the past few years, there has been a high degree of ambivalence over this matter whether the tourism industry brings more disadvantages to the contrary then benefits. Whereas some people say that tourism brings disadvantages to the country, I sanguinely believe that Tourism brings benefits. This essay will further discuss the reasons to support this notion and then deduce a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are myriads of reasons to support this notion, but one of the most compelling reasons is that tourism contributes significantly to the countries economy. Another cogent reason is that it creates employment for the local people. Thus, the benefits and contribution of tourism in a country apparently can be seen.
On the contrary, sceptics conjecture that tourism has more disadvantages than benefits. Their strong argument is that tourists litter the environment, which damages the ecosystem. Moreover, due to the high tourist influx and rise in demand, lots of leisure companies would set up their hotels. This high construction ruins the natural beauty. Although it seems ostensibly veridical, this is one side picture only, all these issues can be handled by the government easily, strict environment protection policies can be enforced to get rid of all these issues.
To conclude, Where there are several compelling arguments from both the sides, I profoundly believe that tourism benefits for a country far outright its drawbacks. Not only do the benefits of tourism proves its significance, but also pinpoints its significance to the economy.
- the environment we live in is at stake due to a range of problems What are the underlying causes Who is responsible to combat this 93
- Which should require more financial support from the government Health or education To what extend do you agree or not Use your experience 59
- Air travel can only benefit the richest people in the world. Ordinary people can get no advantage with the development of air travel. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 77
- Should marketing for consumer goods companies like clothing and food focus on reputation or short term strategies like discount and special offers? and in what ways this can impact reputation? why? 72
- Student travel to study is overrated, we have brilliant scholars who studied locally. Is travel really required for higher studies? 77
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...ourism contributes significantly to the countries economy. Another cogent reason is that ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...points its significance to the economy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, if, moreover, so, then, thus, whereas, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 247.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40890688259 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87170418312 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607287449393 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9662855611 50.4703680194 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.769230769 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 7.25397266985 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0906064440762 0.242375264174 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0330515385544 0.0925447433944 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.029747681066 0.071462118173 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0564556416788 0.151781067708 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023559618165 0.0609392437508 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 55.0591133005 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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