In the past decade, there were lots and lots of inventions which have important contributions to the history of the world. The most well-known contributions are antibiotics, airplanes, and computers. However, one of them has more impact than others in history. In my opinion, the computer not only has changed the past decade but also it will change several things in our future.
Computers require myriads of benefits which ease our lives. People can accomplish great things through computers such as software developments which affects all of the corners of the world. Scientists or in other saying software engineers can write new software to create new solutions to humanity's complex problems. For example, doctors can deeply know about the human body and its biology through benefitting from software; moreover, they can analyze the biology to estimate ways to make their working better.
In addition to this, people have known about ubiquitous things about the world and humanity. As we interpret that people can easily reach any information about anything that they want to learn about it. Furthermore, the help of computers is very needful for us as a result of the extensive needs of modern life. For instance, we need to know about current news about world to take some precautions towards possible unlucky situations such as instant drastic changes in the currency.
To sum up, computers are very helpful to us to make achievements in software developments and make humanity more knowledgeable about vital situations. It seems to me that, humanity will find a way to utilize the opportunity of it to make more advantageous impacts on humanity.
- Some people think that exercise is the key to health while others feel that having a balanced diet is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. 55
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- In the past 100 years, there are many inventions such as antibiotics, airplanes, and computers. What do you think is the most important invent for the past 100 years? Why? 80
- In some countries it is legal for citizens to carry firearms for self-defense purposes. In your opinion, should every country in the world make it legal for their citizens to carry firearms for self-defense purposes? 70
- Team sports are general promoted as a great way to keep fit and build character. However, sporting events such as soccer matches are often accompanied by violence between rival supporters and other forms of antisocial behavior. If sporting events can lead 77
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 159, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... as software developments which affects all of the corners of the world. Scientists or in ...
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Line 3, column 94, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...us things about the world and humanity. As we interpret that people can easily rea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 31.9359605911 147% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 269.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17843866171 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79845414727 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602230483271 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0385899145 50.4703680194 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2142857143 7.25397266985 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0894334188215 0.242375264174 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.035333311384 0.0925447433944 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559877152624 0.071462118173 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0587095230255 0.151781067708 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0736481249928 0.0609392437508 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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