Some people believed that entertainers are more important than scientists. Do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that those who entertain people is far more paramount than experimentalists. This essay disagrees with the statement because it would be impossible to have such a convenient life without the inventions done by scientists and secondly, they sacrifice their joy, enjoyment, and freedom to create something great for society, that is why they are far more significant from entertainers.
To begin with, scientists have improved our life a lot by inventing the technological advancements small things that are a great use in our daily lives. The mobile phone is the best to communicate with people who are far by distance. Also, the internet is also a small part of their creation which has contributed to many lives including to solve the problem associated with personal, social or professional life. We can solve these issues by using things that are created by scientists. That is the reason why Scientists are greater than those who amuse us.
Similarly, Scientists put a lot of effort and their dedication just to bring something useful for society. Normally to complete small inventions it takes a long-time period and to do so scientists give them time to get fulfilled. on the contrary, amusers are not required to wait for and do a lot of work for so long time. For instance, practicing acting or dancing requires only a few amounts of time where scientists have to wait until the positive result will not come
In conclusion, although some people believe entertainers are greater than scientists I totally discard this point of view because the timeline scientists have to give and also because of the importance of technological advancements in life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 231, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...ntists give them time to get fulfilled. on the contrary, amusers are not required ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, for instance, in conclusion, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05776173285 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95869464869 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56678700361 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.130328296 49.4020404114 203% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 127.363636364 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1818181818 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.72727272727 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159021074398 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588306846383 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648023038736 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104961472943 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0683418293841 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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