Some people say it is important to keep your home tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this.
Personality of the person judge by their behaviour. A group of people have perception that it is very important to be clean and proper organised whether one at home or office. I totally agree with the opinion and my inclination justified in ensuing paragraphs.
Among the various viewpoints, the strongest one is, looks of the home or office desk represents the personality of person. Many guests regularly visit a person at home and their first perception build by the appearance of the place. For instance, if the place is messy, then in creates bad impact on the mind of the visitors. Moreover, the habit of to live in a neat area reduce the chances of health issues. Unorganised places becomes the first priority of the insects. Regularly cleaning at the place helps to keep healthy.
Furthermore, proper managed workplace is time efficient. Employees on the workplace can easily search well organised documents which are of various category. For example, allocation of the cupboard to maintain the files in the bank helps executive to find the files of loans or new account opening easily, and improves the accessibility of documents. Apart from this, neat and clean workplace improves the productivity of the workers. Neat the clean place directly effect in the mind and person's behaviour. Some time people got angry when they find difficulty to get the document which misplaced on the desk by person itself.
In Conclusion, arrangement of the places represents the behaviour or personality of a human being. Good appearance of home and proper organised desk creates positive impact on person's mind.
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- The environment we are living in is in danger due to various problems...so who do u thinkshould be responsible to solve it? Is it the governments, organisation or each individual? 56
- You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.Write a letter to this friend. In your latter-Say why he/she would not enjoy going to collage-Explain w 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, then, well, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11742424242 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80532001075 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549242424242 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4190132982 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4705882353 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5294117647 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35294117647 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146014213323 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460974983561 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355406591557 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0945903969359 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280741285465 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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