some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in the countryside. What problems are caused by this issue? What can be done to solve this situation?
The proportion of people leaving outskirts to accommodate in big cities is increasing sharply. This will result in leaving countryside for elderlies, causing some problems for government and individuals.
On one hand, migration of young generation to cities can cause management problems for government. As youths move to the cities, it becomes harder for those who are in power to provide accommodation and adequate infrastructure for them. Firstly, many people come to cities to find a vacant seat to fill, this seeking for a job may leave indigenous people jobless. So one of the tasks of government is to provide new occupations for them. Secondly, government have to control and reduce rents for migrated people, making it possible for immigrants to settle. these problems can be mitigated provided political leaders provide satisfying facilities for people who live in rural area in order to prevent them from migrating.
Older people, on the other hand, have to live in solitude, making it harder for them to live in their last years of living. elderlies require nursing and caring which most of the time is on the hands of their children. Their children could have help them if they had not moved to big cities. So, this might result in early death for them. Children should be encouraged to not leave their parents and stay and run their own family business. With this measure being taken, not only can they have a job, but also they can help their parents to live a healthier life. As a result government do not need to worry about creating new career for youths in big cities.
In conclusion, migration of youngsters to major cities can damage both the cities and their loved ones in their hometown, so it is government’s job to take appropriate measures in order to make new opportunities for them in their own towns.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Elderlies
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95819935691 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74434991523 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530546623794 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3993087503 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.375 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4375 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209999932561 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799934735668 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790273226878 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154936638865 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0867568171727 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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