Many sports player advertise sports related products what are the some of the advantages and disadvantages of this changing trend.
In this era of consumerisation and globalization advertising has become a Cardinal part of the every business around the globe . Thus many prominent sports personalities advertise sports equipments and products to allure the masses. Change is the law of nature and every change brings with some pros and cons . Both the views will be discussed in upcoming paragraphs with my own perspective.
To begin with , Due to advertisement of sports items by sports celebrities it's demand automatically grows and hence employment opportunities also increase. Secondly , the youth gets encouraged through these advertisements and they start participating in games with more zeal and zest . For example, in this modernization world youngers are give more approach to sports and every third children wants to become a sports person.
On the other flip side , promotion of sports equipments by masses favourite players leads to they become crazy about these products and insist to their parents for purchase it . Youth's crazyness towards these items brings imbalance in their monthly expenditure . Moreover, sports players charge huge chunk of money for promoting sports related adds results sellers increases the price of products and it become expensive .
To conclude, advertisement of sports related goods is beneficial but it should be in limit .It's merits outweigh to its demerits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thus, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1169.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 211.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54028436019 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04151373252 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644549763033 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4123739253 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.272727273 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1818181818 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366174052293 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128621343132 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.094632641513 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205565405664 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431668926467 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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