Companies should provide sports and social facilities for local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is often said that companies must contribute in promoting social and recreational activities in local communities by introducing sports and public events. I completely agree that firms ought to provide community campaigns and fitness programs as it could bring comprehensive benefits to people and industries.
To start with, it is true to believe that social gathering with people in local communities will boost the morale of business groups. The majority of employees in most industries are local residents so this can help people to improve communication, increase collaboration, and gain trust in each other. Moreover, the introduction of community campaigns will motivate employees to work together, develop their strengths, and address any weaknesses. Also, social activities facilitate the society to learn and maintain their traditions, which in return give importance to the organization.
On the other hand, promoting fitness programs will uplift the healthy environment in society and could also be the source of determination. Arrangement of sport projects in a community will keep the people motivated and active. Besides, physical fitness is imperative for optimum mental health and it is mandatory to perform aspects of occupations and daily activities. For instance, many jobs today often exposed to a variety of weather and environmental conditions, which necessitates mental as well as physical well-being.
In conclusion, companies should organize social and recreational activities because these are significantly appreciable in local communities. This will benefit the organizations, build a congenial society and will create a healthier environment for people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, it is true, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.86290322581 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2509904038 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600806451613 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 20.499322482 49.4020404114 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 121.166666667 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170686236922 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060788099977 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618729614611 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112498171713 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565585886592 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.71 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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